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 Posted: Wed May 8th, 2013 09:36 pm
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Person C is informed about the impending crime and Person C is generous, or honest, or merely a talkative blabbermouth, or the town crier, or a Modern Day Paul Revere, a whistle blower, informer, news outlet, author, writer, sign maker, inventor, producer, and maintainer of vital questions and competitive answers, intending to connect the information about criminals to each current or potential victim.

removed comma betwen "producer and maintainer"

Person C is informed about the impending crime and Person C is generous, or honest, or merely a talkative blabbermouth, or the town crier, or a Modern Day Paul Revere, a whistle blower, informer, news outlet, author, writer, sign maker, inventor, producer and maintainer of vital questions and competitive answers, intending to connect the information about criminals to each current or potential victim.