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Page 9 adjusting the text to move a LINE that should be on page 9.

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OK.

Makes sense to me.

I don't HAVE, as in possession, a need to disbelieve that God can sacrifice his only begotten son for me and my sins, while currently I see no such thing even being possible.

Would you be jealous if Jesus has a private conversation with me, before he pencils you in on his busy schedule?

Not me, but I'm not the type to slam the door in HIS face either. I want to know the truth, from any messenger.

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“And also Luke 8:12 KJV Those by the way side are they that hear; then cometh the devil, and taketh away the word out of their hearts, lest they should believe and be saved.

And in that verse the devil take the word so that they cannot believe.”

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The line above "And also..." has a line that is supposed to be below it. That line appears on the top of page 10. I can take out the lines, or I can take out some Text to move the line.

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OK. Makes sense to me.

I don't HAVE, as in possession, a need to disbelieve that God can sacrifice his only begotten son for me and my sins, while currently I see no such thing even being possible.

Would you be jealous if Jesus has a private conversation with me, before he pencils you in on his busy schedule?

Not me, but I'm not the type to slam the door in HIS face either. I want to know the truth, from any messenger.

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“And also Luke 8:12 KJV Those by the way side are they that hear; then cometh the devil, and taketh away the word out of their hearts, lest they should believe and be saved.

And in that verse the devil take the word so that they cannot believe.”
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Here is the source:

If you can't find the time to read the book then you will not have as much information available to make sense of the quote: ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I can take out the line "Here is the source:" or I can add the Title to the book.

I did this:

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If you can't find the time to read the book from which the quote below is published, then you will not have as much information available to make sense of the quote: +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++


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Index Link number 8

I took out a link that was not an Amazon book link, and I replaced it with the Amazon book link, because the other one started some advertizements.


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Page 40

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"I am telling you that there are prejudiced people that     H A T E black people and those types of prejudiced people are poison. I am saying be

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PagThere is a lot of space between "that      H A T E"

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"I am telling you that there are prejudiced people that  H A T E black people and those types of prejudiced people are poison.

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The bathwater, when I employ that analogy, means the lies that cover up the violence. And the violence and the threats - all part of the bathwater; and the baby is all that can be done by people to survive and survive better without that bathwater.
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That second sentence is very poor to me.

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The bathwater, when I employ that analogy, means the lies that cover up the violence. The violence, the threats too, are all part of the bathwater; and the baby is all that can be done by people to survive and survive better without that bathwater.
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I said, “It was not my money, in that case.
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Missing quotation mark.

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I said, “It was not my money, in that case.”
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Means, a word, BEING DEFINED according to an authoritative source that DEFINES the word "means:"

means plural of means (Noun)
Noun:
An action or system by which a result is brought about.

Money; financial resources.
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Means, a word, BEING DEFINED according to an authoritative source? Google Search for “means definition.” I find:
means plural of means (Noun)
Noun:
1. An action or system by which a result is brought about.
2. Money; financial resources.
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This is a dragon you are fighting and that dragon is hinted at in the quote published by Erich Fromm on Carl Marx - if you have forgotten it I can re-publish it here.
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Karl not Carl

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This is a dragon you are fighting and that dragon is hinted at in the quote published by Erich Fromm on Karl Marx - if you have forgotten it I can re-publish it here.
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can immobilize, without harming anyone, other than relatively harming them in the sense that they don't get to murder and torture someone, which to them is a loss of their valuable time and energy.
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Replaced period with a question mark.

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can immobilize, without harming anyone, other than relatively harming them in the sense that they don't get to murder and torture someone, which to them is a loss of their valuable time and energy?
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Note: I had removed an extra space between "please." and "Romans" on Page 55.

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Page 76

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"He seemed to listen."
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I added a note this way:

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"He seemed to listen." [Author: Not a reference to Romney]
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Page 76

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"He seemed to listen."
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I added a note this way:

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"He seemed to listen." [Joe: Not a reference to Romney]
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bear: I must answer, “No faith is not earned. Ephesians 2:8&9 (quoting so may not be perfect) “For by grace are ye saved THRU FAITH AND THAT NOT OF YOURSELVES, IT IS A GIFT OF GOD, NOT OF WORKS, LEST ANY MAN SHOULD BOAST.”
Faith is a gift. We will not stand in our own merit. It will all be of God. I will not be able to stand there in his presence and say, “Look what I have done to get here.” Joe the point is: I can't get there alone. I am without hope in this world without Christ

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If you can please add that answer to that question if it is a reference to the book, my ears can listen, but I am only one lost soul. –Joe]

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That looked clumsy to me with the Brackets.

I did this:

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"...I have even had my faith shaken."

How can you remain faithful if you do not resolve contradictions that may appear to be contradictions in time? You are not God, so you will not know everything. And I thought that faith was earned, not handed to you on a silver platter, am I mistaken?
 
“No faith is not earned. Ephesians 2: 8 - 9 (quoting so may not be perfect) “For by grace are ye saved THRU FAITH AND THAT NOT OF YOURSELVES, IT IS A GIFT OF GOD, NOT OF WORKS, LEST ANY MAN SHOULD BOAST.”
Faith is a gift. We will not stand in our own merit. It will all be of God. I will not be able to stand there in his presence and say, “Look what I have done to get here.” Joe the point is: I can't get there alone. I am without hope in this world without Christ.”

That answer to that question is added to this book, because my ears can listen, but I am only one lost soul. [Joe: additions to original]

"But haven’t we talked about the cost of all the deceit?"

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So...you have someone joining them, everyone has joined ‘em. If you use dollars, you are a member if the Union, but the level of "interest" is interesting.
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if is now of

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So...you have someone joining them, everyone has joined ‘em. If you use dollars, you are a member of the Union, but the level of "interest" is interesting.
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After the months these symbols in English were invented, produced, and published as currency, verbal currency, equitably transferred on the Forum called The Daily Paul. Since then, and credited to bear’s diligent help, I’ve made major breakthroughs in thinking – I think.
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I need to rewrite that, but it is time for dinner.

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These symbols in English were arranged and published as currency, verbal currency, equitably transferred on the Forum called The Daily Paul, over a span of many months. Since then, and credited to bear’s diligent help, I’ve made major breakthroughs in thinking – I think.

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Page 109 was:

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Video: [Joe: generously offered by bear to Joe]
“Ron Paul: Unless we understand…we must protect life, we cannot protect liberty.”30
Nice, very nice, link to Ron Paul - thanks a million - that link it is a precious idea well communicated by Ron Paul.

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Video: [Joe: generously offered by bear to Joe]
“Ron Paul: Unless we understand…we must protect life, we cannot protect liberty.”30
Nice, very nice, link to Ron Paul - thanks a million - in that link are precious ideas well communicated by Ron Paul.
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Page 118 was:

I was the Libertarian voice during one official Congressional debate. I went alone to it, at my own expense. The incumbent did not attend, at my expense, too.


Page 118 is:

I was the Libertarian voice during one official Congressional debate. I went alone to it, at my own expense. The incumbent did not attend at my expense too.



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bear,

I am at the Sympathy but Not Empathy Chapter and I decided to contact the Daily Paul Forum Member whose words are quoted in that Chapter.

I am sending the following message to her via the personal contact channel at The Daily Paul. If she does not respond, I will not edit the Chapter.

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Quoting words here, placed in a book

Text
fonta,

I am Joe Kelley, my handle here on this forum is Josf, we have exchanged published words on this forum, and I have those words cut and pasted into a book that will be printed, published, and sold, unless you decide otherwise.

Since my words are going to be printed in the book, I will then need to replace your words with references to the anonymous person who inspired me to write the words I wrote, and the words that inspired me will be missing.

http://www.dailypaul.com/comment/2821837

bear, another forum member, is helping me publish this book, and she decided to cut the words out of that link above, which are now words pasted into a file that will be sent to printers for a book. Your name is not mentioned, my name is mentioned, there is a link to that web page in the book, so far as the book exists in a Word file at this point.

bear, the same forum member helping me publish this book, is concerned about using quotes where the people who published those quotes may not want their words printed in this book.

I am doing what I think should be done, in this case, asking for your permission to print those words of yours.

I don't want to cut this chapter out of the book. If you demand that I do not include any connection to you, whatsoever, in the book, no link to that discussion, no mention of you whatsoever, I still have my words that I will somehow place in the book, and somehow avoid any unwelcome connection to you, if that is your decision.



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What does the FED produce?

Counterfeit Money.
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What does the FED produce?

The FED produces: Counterfeit Money.
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The Legal Criminals must make sure that no one else gains more power than their own small network of sociopaths. That is demonstrable fact, and those facts are actually well recorded in the documents that those criminals produce, in fact, but on a more principled account. The logic and reason of Power can remove all doubt about the right answer to the question.
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The Legal Criminals must make sure that no one else gains more power than their own small network of sociopaths. That is demonstrable fact, and those facts are actually well recorded in the documents that those criminals produce, in fact. On a more principled accounting: the logic and reason of Power can remove all doubt about the right answer to the question concerning the right or wrong of legalized fraud.

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That means: As more and more people are free to compete in the work that does effectively produce more wealth, more things of value, more actual value, more actual productive power, as more and more production is produced. The result of all that "economy" is a reduction in the price of all that "economy," as fewer people have nothing and more people have plenty. The stuff of value goes down in price, as a matter of fact, in reality.

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Is:

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That means: As more and more people are free to compete in the work that does effectively produce more wealth, more things of value, more actual value, more actual productive power, as more and more production is produced... The result of all that "economy" is a reduction in the price of all that "economy," as fewer people have nothing and more people have plenty. The stuff of value goes down in price, as a matter of fact, in reality.

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That is called monetary appreciation (gaining power) or deflation (gaining power).


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Is:

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That is called monetary appreciation (gaining power) or deflation (gaining power). Two words for the same thing.

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Economic Law remains true with or without LAW.
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Economic Law remains true with or without Political LAW.

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